You did a very nice job developing your script for each of your topics. Also the picture you chose were nice and went well with your topics. You also did a very nice putting this all together, saving it as a mpg4, uploading to YouTube and getting it on your blog.
Where you could improve. You didn't introduct your audience to your topic; you jumped right in without explaining what the project was about. -5 No music playing with credits - 5 this was required. Script - organization was off in a few spots. The scuba diving audio played while pictures of the Eiffel Tower was up. -5 You voice was loud enough but recordings were not as smooth . . . practice once through before recording will help next time -3 82% B
Elena,
ReplyDeleteYou did a very nice job developing your script for each of your topics. Also the picture you chose were nice and went well with your topics. You also did a very nice putting this all together, saving it as a mpg4, uploading to YouTube and getting it on your blog.
Where you could improve.
You didn't introduct your audience to your topic; you jumped right in without explaining what the project was about. -5
No music playing with credits - 5 this was required.
Script - organization was off in a few spots. The scuba diving audio played while pictures of the Eiffel Tower was up. -5
You voice was loud enough but recordings were not as smooth . . . practice once through before recording will help next time -3
82% B
Overall you did a nice job with this project.